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Finding Promises - Deleted Scene

Updated: Oct 17, 2023


Summary:

This scene was written into Chapter 13 where Seth had just bought the land for his firing range and gun shop. He takes Cami to show her the land and surprises her with a picnic. They have a blanket laid out and the sun is setting. We are in Cami’s point of view.



Deleted Scene:

Cami leapt into his arms and kissed him with desperation. She wrapped her arms around his neck and clung to him.

Seth plunged his tongue into her mouth and pulled her hard against his chest. His hands moved from her waist to her back and down again to cup her ass. He released her mouth. “I love you, Camila Hartman, don’t ever forget that.”

“I love you too, Seth Taylor.” Her throat was tight and voice thick with emotion.

In one swift motion Seth pulled her flowered sundress over her head leaving her in only her lacy bra and panties. He did it simultaneously with turning her around in his arms and wrapped his left arm over her stomach so his hand gripped her hip. His other hand held her cheek and tipped her face toward his. He gently touched his lips to hers then traced her lips with his tongue.

Seth used his thumb and forefinger to twist her face away and up from his mouth so he had access to her neck. He whispered in a hot breath on her sensitive skin below her ear, “Your body is like a country road I drive to Galorston. It’s newer to me, but I love it. I want to learn every curve, hill and valley.”

His hand squeezed her hip, “Every time I turn onto it, the excitement and anticipation overwhelms me. I want to punch the gas pedal and drive fast, but that would be the waste of a beautiful ride. So I slow it down to enjoy every view and sensation it has to offer.”

Cami braced her back against his chest and gripped his muscular thighs. His words and gentle touch seduced her.

Seth ran his hand from her cheek over her neck to her lace covered breasts. “The best thing about this stretch of road is the same curves, hills…” His hand continued over her stomach to between her legs. “...and valleys surprise me every time. I’m never disappointed by the trip it takes me on.”

Cami was completely entranced by Seth’s intoxicating touch. It elicited spasms deep with her core that teased her senses and clouded her thoughts.

He moved her panties to the side so his deft fingers could access her metaphorical valley. His fingertips brushed over her slit and stopped at her swollen knot.

He whispered in her ear, “My favorite part of the journey is right before the cliff. My heart is in my throat and my head pounds. I can’t think of anything but the fall this road takes me on.”

Cami moaned, “ahh,” and internally pleaded with him to stroke her faster to push her over the cliff. Her hips rocked against his hand desperate for release.

He gripped her hips with his free arm and pinned her against his hard form. “And right before I fall, it is your beautiful face I see.”

Hovering over her shoulder, he kissed her neck then cheek, his breath hot and heady near her mouth. “Then heat penetrates my core and comfort washes over me. You are the perfect ride.”

“Please Seth. I need you,” Cami begged, her body so close yet so far away from complete ecstasy.

“I need you too.” Seth affirmed.

He tapped his finger several times on Cami’s knot. She thrashed against his body. He stopped right before sending her over the edge.

She groaned, “You can’t stop.”

“Oh yes I can. This is the road I ride,” he teased.

Desperate now, Cami urged, “Please, Seth!”

“Lay down, baby, and get naked,” he instructed her.

Seth stripped his clothes and knelt between her legs. He lazily drank in her exposed curves, hills and valleys with his eyes. “The most beautiful country road I've ever seen.”

Cami scooched her hips forward and wrapped her legs around his thighs. “Please ride the road, Seth.”

He let out a husky laugh from deep within his chest. “Aroused, baby?”

“Touch my valley and find out,” she taunted.

“Now you’re playing the game right.” He slid her legs down so he could bend over and awarded her with a lick of his tongue on her slit.

“Yes!” Cami yelled out.

Her success was short-lived. Seth’s mouth followed her hips and left a trail of kisses over her stomach to her breasts.

Cami clamped her legs around his core and arched her back, attempting to get his erection close to her channel. But no luck, he held his hips back.

Seth cupped a breast with his hand and held it firmly so he could lick the tip.

Cami pleaded once more. “Seth, come on, I need this. I swear I’ll have another one later.”

He roared in laughter. “Oh yeah?”

“Yes, I promise,” she panted.

Seth held her other breast and licked the tip slowly. “Don’t you know what I’m doing, baby?”

“Torturing me!” She blurted out.

He kept his attention on her breasts. “No, I’m working on the goal you set for me.”

Cami groaned. “Damn my big mouth.”

Seth licked her cleavage and neck, finally arriving at her mouth. “Camila, I meant what I said. My home is where you are. I promise to always love you.”

At his admission, he finally gave Cami what she begged for. At the same time pulling them both over the cliff to free fall.



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